Very touching background music, fit well. I felt the bleeding person was a bit vague at first. The blood isn't a focal point and is hidden by the darkness (although the use of light was very good). We don't need gore, just a little more clarity. His hand draws in the eye, so maybe place a bit more there? Or perhaps the t-shirt, since it contrasts so well. The acting was quite good, although the victims right arm would fall lower, not balance on the elbow.

Overall; it looks great! Let us know when you have more, it looks interesting.

Very much appreciated! We still need to cast our femal lead. So far the one lady that did a screen test with me got too nervous and uncomfortable with me when i let the evil looks kick in lol so she was out. We have lots of work to do yet. I will keep this thread updated with info and progress

Im down on the weekends or evenings dude. Im currently fire armless so ill have to bum a gun off you ladies. Ill buy ammo of course. Funny, i was talking to aaron about going with him to collect pythons in the wild and filming that as well

I'm down.